Thursday, 28 April 2016

Micro skills for Writing

1.Produce graphemes and orthographic patterns of English.
2.Produce writing at an efficient rate of speed to suit the purpose.
3.Produce an acceptable core of words and use appropriate word order patterns.
4.Use acceptable grammatical systems (e.g., tense, agreement, pluralization), patterns, and rules.
5.Express a particular meaning in different grammatical forms.

6.Use cohesive devices in written discourse. 
7.Use the rhetorical forms and conventions of written discourse.
8.Appropriately accomplish the communicative functions of written texts according to form and purpose.
9.Convey links and connections between events, and communicative such relations as main idea, supporting idea, new information, given information, generalization, and exemplification.
10.Distinguish between literal and implied meanings of writing.
11.Correctly convey culturally specific references in the context of the written text.
12.Develop and use a battery of writing strategies, such as accurately assessing audience's interpretation, using prewriting devices, writing with fluency in the first drafts, using paraphrases and synonyms, soliciting peer and instructor feedback, and using feedback for revising and editing.

12 Jenis Paragraf dan contohnya

Udah lama nih ga ngepost sejak dua tahun yang lalu. baiklah ga usah ada panjang lebar ya. kali ini saya bakal ngepos tentang 12 jenis paragraf. lets see



Deskriptif
Sepeda tua yang diparkir disamping rumah Adi itu adalah peninggalan dari neneknya. Besinya mungkin sudah tua bila dipandang, namun hampir tidak ada karat satupun yang melekat. Modelnya seperti sepeda tahun abad ke-18, ini sangat berharga bagi Adi. 

Eksposisi
Angklung adalah alat musik tradisional yang terbuat dari bambu yang merupakan warisan nenek moyang dan sudah diakui oleh lembaga UNESCO  November tahun 2010.

Persuasi
Batu Tampaning adalah batu akik khas dari Kabupaten Soppeng yang memiliki keunikan berupa warna yang mirip dengan sari kelapa. Harga dari batu Tampaning ini terbilang murah berkisar Rp. 300.000,- untuk sebuah bongkahan. Jangan lewatkan koleksi Anda tanpa Batu Tampaning. 

Argumentasi
Gerakan radikal memang seharusnya dibumihanguskan oleh pemerintah dari tanah Indonesia, karena tentu saja gerakan ini akan mengkhawatirkan masyarakat Indonesia. 

Narasi
Pergilah Andi ke pasar menggunakan sepeda bututnya, sesampainya di pasar dibelilah kebutuhan-kebutuhan hidupnya bersama sang ayah yang sakit-sakitan. Setelah semua barang terbeli ia kembali mengayuh sepeda tuanya menuju rumahnya yang hanya berupa gubuk di pinggir sungai.

Khusus-Umum
Wajah berminyak adalah suatu kendala bagi para remaja. Apabila seorang remaja mengetahui dirinya mengalami wajah berminyak kepercayaan dirinya akan berkurang. Sehingga sering canggung atau grogi saat berada di tempat umum. Wajah berminyak dapat disebabkan oleh suhu udara dan juga tingkat aktivitas maupun alasan genetik

Umum-Khusus
Oleh sebab itu saya sangat setuju dengan adanya kegiatan kerja bakti seminggu sekali. Karena, jika lingkungan hidup bersih maka kita juga akan sehat. Maka dari itu, kegiatan kerjanbakti sangat penting di lingkungan sekolah.

Sebab akibat
Kemarau tahun ini terjadi sangat lama. Sumur, sungai, bahkan danau telah mengering. Selain itu, tanah di sekitar persawahan juga retak-retak. Semua tanaman yang ada di sana tak terkecuali padi mati dan mengering. Petani bahkan tidak sempat lagi untuk memanennya. Akibatnya, tahun ini petani mengalami kerugian yang sangat besar.

Akibat – Sebab
Cuaca saat ini menajdi semakin panas. Bahkan kita tidak bisa lagi memprediksi datangnya musim karena sudah tidak pasti lagi kapan datangnya. Cuaca yang sangat panas ini diikuti oleh melelehnya gunung – gunung es yang ada di kutub utara sehingga menaikan volume permukaan air laut. Hal ini sungguh sangat berbahaya bagi kelangsungan hidup manusia. Tetapi bagian ironisnya adalah bahaya – bahaya tersebut, disebabkan oleh perilaku manusia sendiri yang memicu terjadinya global warming.

Analogi
Adanya 2 atau lebih hal yang dibandingkan secara bergantian. Hal yang dibandingkan tersebut bisa berbentuk obyek atau pun hal yang abstrak seperti kejadian, proses, ataupun keadaan. Dan yang paling penting adalah tingkat kesetaraan antara hal pembanding tersebut haruslah seimbang.

Generalisasi
Buah kelapa dapat dijadikan sebagai bahan makanan dan minuman yang segar. Tak hanya buahnya, kayu pohon kelapa dapat dimanfaatkan sebagai bahan bangunan. Sedangkan pelapahnya dapat dijadikan sapau ijuk. Bahkan akarnya pun bisa dimanfaatkan sebagai bahan bakar. Oleh karena itu pohon kelapa sangat bermanfaat bagi kehidupan manusia.

Retoris 

Untuk apa kita berperang, bukankah sebaiknya kita berdamai?

Thursday, 10 April 2014

The Conjuring



The Conjuring



I got this film from my friend, I was watch this film on April 5, 2014
Genre: Horror Film

Synopsis

In 1971, Roger and Carolyn Perron move into a dilapidated farmhouse in Harrisville, Rhode Island with their five daughters. During the first day, their move goes smoothly, though their dog, Sadie, refuses to enter the house and one of the daughters finds a boarded up entrance to a cellar.

Introduction

The next morning, Carolyn wakes up with a mysterious bruise and Sadie is found lying dead outside the house by April, the youngest daughter. Over the next several days, various instances of paranormal disturbance occur, most notably when Christine and Nancy are attacked one night by an unseen figure. The activity culminates one night while Roger is away in Florida. After hearing various clapping and giggling noises, and seeing the picture frames shattered on the stairs, Carolyn is locked up in the cellar. Later Cindy, one of the daughters, is awakened after sleepwalking into her sister Andrea's roomshe sees a spirit on top of a wardrobe in the room that leaps on and attacks Andrea.


Climax

Carolyn contacts noted paranormal investigators Ed and Lorraine Warren for help of her family. The Warrens conduct an initial investigation and conclude that the house may require an exorcism, but they needed authorization from the Catholic Church and further evidence before they can proceed.


The Perron family decides to take refuge at a hotel while Ed and Lorraine take their evidence to the Church to arrange an exorcism. While the Warrens are on their way home, their daughter is attacked in their own home by the spirit of Bathsheba, though Ed arrives in time to prevent her from being harmed.
Carolyn, now possessed by the spirit of Bathsheba, takes two of her daughters, Christine and April, and drives back to the house. Ed, Lorraine, Roger, and two assistants rush to the house where they find Carolyn trying to stab Christine with scissors. After subduing Carolyn and tying her to a chair, Ed decides to perform the exorcism himself. Though Carolyn escapes and attempts to kill April, who is hiding under the floorboards, Lorraine is able to temporarily distract the possessed Carolyn from killing her daughter by reminding her of a special memory she shared with her family, allowing Ed to complete the exorcism, saving Carolyn and her daughter.


Resolution
Returning home, Lorraine tells Ed that the priest who they sought for the exorcism had called back and left a message, saying that he had gained approval from the Catholic Church to perform it. In addition to this, he also has another case for them to investigate on Long Island. When they leave, the music box that April had found opens and plays music, but nothing appears through the mirror.


Characteristic
Real Name
Character Name
Characteristic
paranormal investigator
paranormal investigator
Roger Perron
Kind father, humble and diligent
Carolyn Perron
Humble, protective mother
Andrea Perron
Nice kid
Nancy Perron
Pampered

Christine Perron
Pampered kid and humble
Cindy Perron
Nice kid
Kyla Deaver
April Perron
Pampered

Moral expression

Be patient
Don’t leave me alone
What the hell
Go the hells bitch
Miss me?
What do you want from me?
Oh my god
Im so tired
Oh Sadie
Comment
This movie is good, and so scary. This movie is based on true story,  producer make it almost perfect .

Thursday, 20 March 2014

IRON MAN 3

IRON MAN 3


GENRE                       : ACTION-FICTION
SOURCE         : I got this film from my friend, i watched this movie march 17  2014

Characteristic

Name
Real Name
Character
A self-described genius, billionaire, playboy, and philanthropist with mechanical suits of armor of his own invention. 
Stark's girlfriend, longtime associate, and CEO of Stark Industries Paltrow says of her character's relationship to Tony
Stark's best friend, the liaison between Stark Industries and the U.S. Air Force in the department of acquisitions
The creator of the Extremis virus and the founder of Advanced Idea Mechanics, who adopts the mantle of the Mandarin as his own
A botanist whose work helped create Extremis
A war veteran who becomes an assassin after her exposure to Extremis
Killian's Extremis-powered henchman
Tony Stark's former bodyguard and chauffeur, now Stark Industries head of security


Synopsis

Tony Stark recalls a New Years Eve party in 1999 where he meets scientist Maya Hansen, the inventor of Extremis, an experimental regenerative treatment intended to allow recovery from crippling injuries. Disabled scientist Aldrich Killian offers them a place in his company Advanced Idea Mechanics, but Stark rejects the offer, humiliating Killian. . . . . . . .

Introduction
Years later, Stark's experiences during the alien invasion of New York are giving him panic attacks. Restless, he has built several dozen Iron Man suits, creating friction with his girlfriend Pepper Potts. Meanwhile, a string of bombings by a terrorist known only as the Mandarin has left intelligence agencies bewildered by a lack of forensic evidence. Stark's security chief Happy Hogan is badly injured in a Mandarin attack, forcing Stark to issues a televised threat to the Mandarin, who responds by destroying Stark's home with helicopter gunships. Hansen, who came to warn Stark, survives the attack along with Potts. Stark escapes in an Iron Man suit, which his artificial intelligence JARVIS pilots to rural Tennessee, following a flight plan from Stark's investigation into the Mandarin. Stark's experimental armor lacks sufficient power to return to California, and the world believes him dead.
Teaming with Harley, a precocious 10-year-old boy, Stark investigates the remains of a local explosion bearing the hallmarks of a Mandarin attack. He discovers the "bombings" were triggered by soldiers subjected to Extremis, which at this stage of development can cause certain subjects to explosively reject it. After veterans started exploding, these explosions were falsely attributed to a terrorist plot in order to cover up Extremis' flaws. Stark witnesses Extremis firsthand when Mandarin agents Ellen Brandt and Eric Savin attack him.

CLIMAX
With Harley's help, Stark traces the Mandarin to Miami and infiltrates his headquarters using improvised weapons. Inside he discovers the Mandarin is actually a British actor named Trevor Slattery, who claims he is oblivious to the actions carried out in his name. Killian, who appropriated Hansen's Extremis research as a cure for his own disability and expanded the program to include injured war veterans, reveals he is the real Mandarin, using Slattery as a cover. After capturing Stark, Killian kidnaps Potts and subjects her to Extremis to gain Stark's aid in fixing Extremis' flaws and thereby saving Potts. Killian kills Hansen when she has a change of heart about the plan.
Killian has also manipulated American intelligence agencies regarding the Mandarin's location, luring James Rhodes—the former War Machine, now re-branded as the Iron Patriot—into a trap to steal the armor. Stark escapes and reunites with Rhodes, discovering that Killian intends to attack President Ellis aboard Air Force One. Remotely controlling his Iron Man armor, Stark saves some surviving passengers and crew but cannot stop Killian from abducting Ellis and destroying Air Force One. They trace Killian to an impounded damaged oil tanker where Killian intends to kill Ellis on live television. The vice president will become a puppet leader, following Killian's orders in exchange for Extremis to cure a little girl's disability.

RESOLUTION
On the platform, Stark goes to save Potts, as Rhodes saves the president. Stark summons his Iron Man suits, controlled remotely by JARVIS, to provide air support. Rhodes secures the president and takes him to safety, while Stark discovers Potts has survived the Extremis procedure. However, before he can save her, a rig collapses around them and she falls to her assumed death. Stark confronts Killian and traps him in an Iron Man suit that self-destructs, but fails to kill him. Potts, whose Extremis powers allowed her to survive her fall, intervenes and kills Killian.
After the battle, Stark orders JARVIS to remotely destroy each Iron Man suit as a sign of his devotion to Potts. The vice president and Slattery are arrested. With Stark's help, Potts' Extremis effects are stabilized, and Stark undergoes surgery to remove the shrapnel embedded near his heart. He pitches his obsolete chest arc reactor into the sea, musing he will always be Iron Man.
In a present day post-credits scene, Stark wakes up Dr. Bruce Banner, who fell asleep listening to Stark's story.

MORAL VALUE
Pretty much the same one as the first two: the negative consequences of arrogance in our dealings with other people. Tony Stark once again has to face the repercussions of his dissolute past as a man he slighted years ago (ably played by Guy Pearce) comes back for revenge not just on Stark, but on the whole world. Stark’s thoughtless cruelty to someone who seemed unworthy of his time and attention (i.e., wasn’t an attractive blonde) only lasted a moment, but had consequences that lasted far into the future. Not that the villain is completely without blame—he is a criminal mastermind, after all—but the film recognizes that our actions in the present have an effect on the future.